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Posted: January 20, 2014 in Poetry
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are the sentence without a period

The movement in the puddle after the rains

The scent that lingers when the scent is gone

The oxygen for the oxygen

The letters that spell out the word love

The one thing I’ll never leave behind

 

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Comments
  1. campbelllaura says:

    “The movement in the puddle after the rains” … That’s my favorite line …

  2. Gorgeous
    beaut line re. The movement in the puddle after it rains

  3. wolfsrosebud says:

    interesting how this piece progresses forward… and the comparison of nature to life

  4. bejamin4 says:

    Thanks. Thank you for reading and commenting.

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