Don’t Be Someone Else’s

Posted: February 13, 2014 in Poetry
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140 syllables

Don’t be someone else’s evening

Be my morning

Let us kiss each other with these arrows

So we can love

48 hours a day

14 days a week

104 weeks a year




If you won’t be mine

Tell me before we kiss with these arrows

Because if you won’t be mine

There are other uses for these arrows

So that you won’t be someone else’s either.

  1. Miranda Stone says:

    Yikes! This started out so romantic, and I thought, “What a fitting poem for Valentine’s Day.” But I should have known better. That ending–chilling!

  2. Pua Nani says:

    Know what u mean…

  3. redgladiola says:

    Lovely work. I have to say, that first stanza is just amazing.

  4. sagarika says:

    Unique composition of words, I liked it very much ‘the use of the arrows’. Would love to use the ‘arrows’! πŸ™‚

  5. jskaarthic23 says:

    Phew … loved it, especially the last line !!!

  6. F.G.M. says:

    Great poem. Thank you for sharing!

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