Words Synonymous With The One I Loved

Posted: March 6, 2014 in Poetry
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Cobwebs
Dodo
Mummy
Sequel
Pluto
Purgatory

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Comments
  1. haddyism says:

    Ouch

  2. Interesting choices.

  3. vgarrison77 says:

    well I hope that punched them in the gut! very creative 🙂

  4. babylondogs says:

    This is one of my favorites. Takes time to really let each word settle in. Well done. Simple yet causes pause and thought. Love it.

  5. Miranda Stone says:

    I’m wondering if these words are merely ones you used in referring to the one you loved, or if they show some kind of linear pattern. In that case, I don’t think you’d be off to a very good start with cobwebs. But then, I’m probably reading too much into things.

    • bejamin4 says:

      I think they could be linear in many ways but it doesn’t necessarily have to be. The final line was definitely put there on purpose, though. And I think you’re right in assuming some linear pattern although I didn’t fully intend on it and saw it as more of an all-encompassing definition. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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