Breeding Death

Posted: March 7, 2014 in Poetry
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An eraser that erases mess
An eraser to protect
Erasing space
Erasing place
Erasing with erasing haste
Erase hate
Erase                  erase
Erase what we’ve erased

Erase so fast
Erase with pace
Erase so hard
Erase your face
Erase your mind
Erase Erases
Erasing time

Erase with every eraser you find
Erase the erase the eraser makes

  1. haddyism says:

    Truth erases messes so does Alzheimer’s

  2. caliroe says:

    This piece has such a powerful, pounding pace! I really enjoy reading it out loud!

  3. Miranda Stone says:

    Kind of mindboggling, Benjamin! And talk about a poem that’s begging to be read aloud. Great work.

  4. Grace Black says:

    Lovely pacing and quite a haunting message. Wonderful.

  5. Amazing sustained writing Benjamin!

  6. Wicked flow, Man. Love this.

  7. This one would be great in audio!

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