Punctuation Love

Posted: March 17, 2014 in Poetry
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Without a single . (period)
We move like the ˜ (tilde)
Love [against] love
Meeting within (parentheses)

We are the ; (semicolon)
The & (ampersand)
The ‽ (interrobang)

I am your ! (exclamation point)
Your ’ (apostrophe)

Don’t leave me with an … (ellipsis)
Leave me with “ ” (quotation marks)

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Comments
  1. the interrobang is so cool. I think it’s coming back!

  2. haddyism says:

    That’s awesome!

  3. Phen Weston says:

    Hahaha this is genius. I love the opening line, and it just keeps gets better from there. Very clever XD

  4. Very clever .. great though!

  5. LClark says:

    Cool.

  6. Grace Black says:

    Ah, to lie in quotation marks eternal; a souls’ love.

  7. Your writing is so inspiring and fresh. I’m pretty positive your creative well is never going to run dry. Jealous. 🙂

  8. meighanson says:

    Beautiful capturing of the unseen feelings of symbols.
    Quotation marks. I like that. Feels concrete and seen. Like a love that could last.

  9. Miranda Stone says:

    I’ll never look at punctuation marks in the same way again. 🙂 Very cleverly constructed, Benjamin. I like the ending stanza, the way the narrator pleas for a final word from his/her beloved.

    • bejamin4 says:

      Yes, that is what I was trying to achieve with the ending. I’m glad you pointed it out. Thanks for reading and making the comment. It means a lot.

  10. This is excellent! I love it.

  11. Gauche says:

    Where do you get these ideas from? Just give us the address, already. 🙂 Excellentttt

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