Posted: April 14, 2014 in Poetry
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Love means too much to be compressed into four letters
Letters mean more when they go undiscovered
Undiscovered is God
God is the most common name used in bed
Bed is where the future is created
Created things don’t last long
Long is the length of yesterday
Yesterday was the last time I loved you
You lean on me like you’re made of honey
Honey is no substitute for glue
Glue cannot hold emotions together
Together is synonymous with apart
Apart we will only find shadows
Shadows hold in place our love

  1. Great piece- is there a special name for a poem that uses the last word in a line as the first word in the next? Clever as always!

  2. Another wonderful creation!:-)

  3. bejamin4 says:

    Thank you so much 🙂

  4. Very clever and wonderfully sustained work Benjamin.

  5. Miranda Stone says:

    A beautifully written poem, Benjamin. I love how each line leads effortlessly into the next, until the poem is brought full circle.

  6. Phen Weston says:

    Another amazing poem my friend. It is a true expression of how love can be.

  7. Lex Garcia says:

    As always your words touch to the very depth of the soul, to which reader like me can relate to… I love this piece (:

  8. rjl2727 says:

    outstanding my friend. “Long is the length of yesterday. Yesterday was the last time i loved you.” so powerful and so true of this thing we call “love”. excellent write.

  9. Wow, this flows and blends incredibly well sir. Awesome poem thanks for sharing.

  10. I’m definitely trying one of these, B. Loved it!

  11. […] answer to silence ***** I enjoyed trying this style originally found on Benjamin’s blog: The Breakdown of Taboo – Leftovers. Thank you, Benjamin, for the permission to give this poetic form a […]

  12. stacilys says:

    Hi Benjamin, nice poem. I love experimenting with the different poetry forms, and appreciate the creativity that comes about having to follow an order or within boundaries.
    Way to go.

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