Our Commandment

Posted: May 4, 2014 in Poetry
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Written on two hearts
We spoke; God watched
“Love our love.”

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Comments
  1. esalyesi says:

    Mellifluous writing, beautiful meanings… I love it.

  2. Miranda Stone says:

    I really like the simplicity of this one, Benjamin. Every word is perfectly chosen. Well done.

  3. Radika says:

    Well-formed. Love this!

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