Goodbye To Goodbye

Posted: June 24, 2014 in Poetry
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The bye never is
Good

The wave alone
Puts waves in my eyes

Will this be a parting?

Or

Will this be an end?

The bye never is
Good

I wish only to say goodbye
To goodbye.

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Comments
  1. dtdeedge says:

    Sometimes it is good,
    An end to something that once was,
    But no longer is.

  2. I hate saying goodbye… but saying goodbye to goodbye, now that’s something ๐Ÿ™‚ ……. although I can think of a few things I would love to say goodbye to.

  3. bejamin4 says:

    Perhaps. This person may be wise ;). Have a wonderful evening, Laura.

  4. dbwolfe says:

    I dig “waves in my eyes.” I love the symmetry and logic in your poems, they’re like emotional equations being solved. Keep going man!

  5. redgladiola says:

    Wonderful poem. I especially like the opening two lines because they ring so true.

  6. Miranda Stone says:

    A touching poem, Benjamin. And once again, a clever play on words.

  7. Phen Weston says:

    Great concept and very powerful my friend ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. Mike says:

    Clever wordplay in this inspired idea – greatly enjoyed thank you.

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