A Second Helping

Posted: July 5, 2014 in Poetry
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I am a fool
I didn’t realize I was already full
I never needed a second you.

  1. πŸ™‚ nice play on words.

  2. Samantha says:

    Hindsight is always 20/20. Loved this one — brief & stinging to the ex!

  3. redgladiola says:

    Hope it’s not too late. πŸ˜‰

  4. Miranda Stone says:

    Seems it’s difficult for us to realize when we have all we need. We’re taught to keep striving for something better, something more. Powerful words here, Benjamin.

    • bejamin4 says:

      Yes, I agree. I like what you said there. It is hard to realize that you get can better than best sometimes. Sometimes we just need what we already have. Things don’t always have to be better on the other side.

  5. Phen Weston says:

    Well said πŸ™‚

  6. Been there. Done that. Haha.

  7. babylondogs says:

    I enjoy all your work, but is one seems to be one of your best distillations yet. Few words, deep impact.

  8. babylondogs says:

    My comment was supposed to read “… THIS one seems to be …”

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