Back In The Sea

Posted: August 5, 2014 in Poetry
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I’m finally off your hook
If you ever found me on your line again
It would take a divine strength
To reel me back in.

  1. Miranda Stone says:

    Good one! And can’t we all relate to this feeling of relief when we’re finally truly over someone?

  2. Phen Weston says:

    Great poem. Those hooks can be deadly! Leaving you dangling, spiralling at their whim.

  3. Mike says:

    Sounds firm enough to be chiseled in stone. Nice work.

  4. Anna says:

    so true! lovely lines

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