Butterfly Love

Posted: August 10, 2014 in Poetry, Uncategorized
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Your love was like a butterfly
Beautiful one day
Dead the next

  1. Miranda Stone says:

    Wow, that’s a startling transition from the first line to the third, Benjamin! Hard hitting in the way you so simply state it. Well done.

  2. This packs a punch. Brilliant!

  3. Phen Weston says:

    Wow, what a powerful, sad and beautiful image. It is such a strong, yet simple analogy of love. Well done, it’s completely perfect XD

  4. emma1951.wordpress.com says:

    I really, really like this! I don’t have many followers, but would love to re-blog it on my site – your ‘about’ says it would be okay, but I’d like your permission… if you don’t mind? πŸ™‚

  5. emma1951.wordpress.com says:

    Reblogged this on Forever After and commented:
    … feeling it in the heart, spoken so well by the author…

  6. Wow, this is great. Really made me smile… oddly enough!

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