Bloomless

Posted: August 20, 2014 in Poetry
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Our love should have
Been a flower
But it was one letter off
Boom!

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Comments
  1. F.G.M. says:

    In French I would say – joli poΓ¨me d’amour, I love its shortness and of course the final onomatopoeia – nice touch of humor!

  2. Miranda Stone says:

    This made me chuckle, maybe because I’m imagining flower blossoms exploding. πŸ˜› Well done, my friend. Hope you’re having a good week.

  3. Anonymous says:

    you’re a clever one…

  4. this is a good one. but i’m like a broken record… i say that all the time!

  5. Zara says:

    Wow…love this!

  6. Phen Weston says:

    Very clever πŸ™‚

  7. esalyesi says:

    That’s actually quite funny.

  8. This is funny. Exact and to the point. Great humor!

  9. Your work makes me glad I’m back on wordpress!!

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