Have You Written This Poem?

Posted: October 16, 2014 in #justlove, Poetry
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I tried to write a poem
Not for me, just for you
But the only words
That came out were:
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you

#justlove

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Comments
  1. Svelte says:

    At a glance I thought I had, ‘cept mine contained I love you x7! Jk! πŸ™‚ #justlove

  2. Yeah, I think I have one or a hundred of those from my school-girl crush years πŸ˜‰ Really liking the #justlove …

  3. Miranda Stone says:

    This is such a moving poem in its simplicity, Benjamin. Well done, my friend.

  4. I should have you proofread my I love you poems. πŸ˜‰ This poem is so simple. I adore your thoughts, Mr. Flirty. You simply wrote of an amazing feeling…

  5. F.G.M. says:

    Love is simple! You have proven it! πŸ™‚

  6. stacilys says:

    Now that’s a lot of love. πŸ™‚
    You’re just a romantic at heart, aren’t you Benjamin.
    Lovely.
    πŸ™‚

  7. InfiniteZip says:

    I write it in my head a lot, I try to say it to myself at least twice a day, and to the hubs constantly πŸ™‚

  8. Phen Weston says:

    Sheer brilliance my friend. Sometimes that is all the words you need. The most beautiful and emotive. Love is a great word πŸ™‚

  9. Johnny Ojanpera says:

    Masterful work, Benjamin. I love you too.

  10. The “simplicity” of this says it all. I am going to print this for my stepson. He delights in poems such as this- the rhythm and tone speak to him.

  11. redgladiola says:

    I say that’s the best way to go about it. Direct communication without a chance for misunderstanding! =)

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