A Lament For J

Posted: December 3, 2014 in Poetry
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I write this lament
Because you cannot see
The one who shares
Your sheets at night
As I have seen

Like the vampire
The flesh, the bones
Are only illusions

There is nothing behind
That skin but lines to lies
Machinations so dark
They make dark appear light

The being that was
Is not the being that is
For only the shadow of a soul
Could subsist off love’s hollowness

Take a look at the one before you
In the light and you will see
Not even a reflection of lamentations

  1. jadedmess says:

    Oh this is so good! Happy to see you’re back πŸ™‚

  2. Pua Nani says:

    I love it. Totally feel this one

  3. Excellent! So glad you are back!:-)

  4. stacilys says:

    Ooooohhhhh. Is this about someone you know? Maybe someone that hurt you? These are some pretty potent lines here.
    Great poem Bemjamin.

  5. dertalmid says:

    Great, welcome back πŸ™‚

  6. “There is nothing behind
    That skin but lines to lies”

    Love this line… I would lament, too.

  7. 5h2o says:

    Very nicely done! Love how the structure of the stanzas pushes back on the subject.

  8. You can cut the narcissism with a knife. Your talent continues, Ben.

  9. redgladiola says:

    Beautiful! I could feel the longing and sadness clearly. A wistful piece.

  10. Phen Weston says:

    Beautifully written my friend. Very touching πŸ™‚

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