Frame Of Mind

Posted: January 13, 2015 in #justlove, Poetry
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In the frame of my mind
There is a photograph of
You and I
Separated by a wall
With a hole just wide enough
For our hands to fit through

What’s in the frame of your mind? I’d love to know.


  1. Would that be a good thing?

  2. Very good- I like the open-ended-ness of this

  3. Well after reading this, in my frame of mind, there are two people taking sledge hammers to that wall so more than just their hands are touching…..

  4. Could be that first chink out of the Berlin Wall. Then again, it could be…

  5. cmrsyk1985 says:

    I love the brevity of your thoughts, especially when they’re so clear. Keep up the great work, brother!

  6. In the frame of my mind
    There’s a quiet path
    I often travel, alone
    He travels it, as well
    Greets me from behind
    Already knowing my name

    Lovely poem, Benjamin. That was fun.

  7. JordanBlum87 says:

    I dig it *snap snap*

  8. JordanBlum87 says:

    I like the brevity and mystery of it. It’s hopeful, I think.

  9. Phen Weston says:

    Masterful thought, beautifully written. You words are always more perfect than I could say πŸ™‚

  10. lostsoul62 says:

    cute poem , i loved it πŸ™‚

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