Vacancy

Posted: February 2, 2015 in #justlove, Poetry
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If you’re looking
For a place to rest
There’s a loveseat
Inside of my heart

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Comments
  1. redgladiola says:

    And hopefully, a couch for family and friends!

  2. Simple and very sweet πŸ™‚

  3. kirsten says:

    This is AWESOME! I love the poignant simplicity of the words. They are words that speak volumes and give peace.

  4. Evidence of less can be best. πŸ™‚ Love the brevity.

  5. You should probably get that checked out, ha ha!

  6. You do have a big heart. This I know to be true. Lovely, Ben.

  7. Haha. I don’t think this was meant to be comedic whatsoever and if my reaction offends you truly I am sorry friend. The imagery for whatever reason hit a funny bone inside me, I’ve always wondered about the love seat. Every time I’ve sat in one I instantly feel uncomfortable, like the expectations of love are hovering over my shoulders waiting to pounce. Go figure I’m strange but you provoked this with your piece, so realistically, it is your fault haha

    • bejamin4 says:

      Haha, that’s fine. I think there is supposed to be a playfulness to the piece, certainly. And I’m glad you found it funny in some way. Audience reaction only serves to add to any particular piece. Thanks for commenting. Always appreciate your thoughts.

  8. shunpwrites says:

    The death of words… Makes it powerful, yet succinct! This is hard!

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